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Vertigo Contusions by ~Opsimath:iconOpsimath:



Vertigo contusions concieved at the wrist.
Severance from this sidereal bliss.
Inertiatic pandemic spreads like fire.
Ashes to remain on the funeral pyre.

Cardiac wraiths now mar his visage.
His iris falls upon a sapient image.
Mascara lips; scissors and suture
Tunnel spread: he is their future.

Ashes now remain on the funeral pyre.
Illusions are lost beneath the warm mire.

Prosthetic limb.
Concentric whims.


Carpal snare, levitating queens.
Parachute fall is the only means
to escape the erudite whirlpool.
Another added to the toll, a facet of the jewel.

Prosthetic limb.
Concentric whims.
Shaking hands with
the undertow again.
©2005-2009 ~Opsimath
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Author's Comments

Lyrics; there's music too, I don't like these lyrics though lol

I experimented by stressing each part that I felt had a certain need for it

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I understood 8 of those words. :D


Awesome. :hug: =D

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Oh wow, this was really good. I loved how you emphasized certain words by making them stand out. It made them seem different, detached which brought a new level to the poem/lyrics thingy. Well done.

"Mascara lips; scissors and suture
Tunnel spread: he is their future."
I loved those lines.

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haha =) thanks though.. for all the favs too lmao :P
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Thanks a lot =) those were probably my least favorite lines =P
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what about the other 6 lmao
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what are you getting at with the selective emphasis?
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:hug: lol I'm sure you know more than 8 :P and thanks though :)

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